Thank you so much! I was kind of worried about this one, because I never specify what's wrong with Emily, other than she's been stuck in that place for an eternity. It's an older work, and the original was quite the workout to fix, but I'm glad you liked the final product.
The paragraphs aren't too long, the storyline makes sense, the dialogue isn't too bad either. Plus, it's very descriptive! Very good!
Everything is all good! I don't have much to critic...