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Tenshi no Yami

Always a pleasure to read something new from you.

This was dark ( I love dark as much as drama) but jeez. I have many, many questions but one is one I usually ask many.

Will you be continuing this? I would love to know of the MC's circumstances and the mystery behind this structure.

Not sure why but it makes me think of an SCP...

Nice work per usual, Blanks

3 years agoReply

Blankmarks

Thanks a lot Tenshi, I'm really glad you liked it. I don't think I'll be continuing it since it might ruin its mystique and I don't have much to add. I can't believe I didn't see the connection to SCP when writing it but yeah, this could fit in that world.

3 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@Blankmarks, well, that stinks but valid reasoning.

Look forward to the short piece(s) in the future ✌🏿

3 years agoReply

Max Maze

@Blankmarks, There is always more to add) I really liked it!

2 years agoReply

Blankmarks

@Max Maze,Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Still can't think of anything to add and I currently don't have time to. But feel free to give me some suggestions.

2 years agoReply

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