Definitely got some poteintial buddy! Not a bad read ;)

When i read your intro to this i was worried that despite sounding interesting this story wouldn't have a  style i would like then i saw this line "They where ass holes with immense power" (most likely quoted wrong) and that removed all worries 
 
How ironic me talking about style and the thing that makes me want to read this more was in reality that one line .... im wired