I enjoy what you've got going here. Your storyline is interesting and drags the reader alongside Steven, and your format of separate stories making up a larger plot is something I admire. Keep up the good work!
so this is really different. you have created a sort of post apocalyptic world but not really! loving the idea of A.I. seeking control. the little love triangle throws in a little heat too! you have me curious as to why the drones have suddenly become hostile! moving on to the next chapter
I appreciate that my friend, it's daunting so I'm glad you made it all the way through the chapter! Plenty more to come if you're interested, I just don't quite have it written yet...