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Sarahh1h

I’m curious, did any of the characters surprise you and end up becoming different from how you first imagined them? Also, do you share your writing anywhere besides FanFiction?

16 hours agoReply

Jeff Marc

I Post on webnovel before sending them here

10 hours agoReply

Ariana45

I got to the end much faster than I expected because I was enjoying it so much.

1 day agoReply

Jeff Marc

Thanks

20 hours agoReply

Ariana45

@Jeff Marc ,You're welcome, I've some character ideas, wanna know?

19 hours agoReply

readwithinsiight

Hi I just finished reading this, and I wanted to say it was a fascinating read. The voice feels grand and almost biblical, which really suits the theme of a creator speaking before existence itself. I especially liked how each decree built on the last, making the piece feel vast and timeless.
As I was reading, I found myself making a few notes about areas where the flow and readability could be even stronger, but I didn't want to leave unsolicited critique. If you're open to constructive beta reader feedback, I'd be happy to share my thoughts. If not, no worries at all. I enjoyed reading .

1 week agoReply

Elsaa

It looks and feels remarkably genuine i can’t help but feel this is the foundation of something truly special

2 months agoReply

Jeff Marc

Thanks 🙏

1 month agoReply

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