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Nice. Although, A bisexual character as the main character can be better, seeing as everytime an LGBT story the characters a boy, they. Immediately make him gay.

4 years agoReply

DerpyTrashcan

4 years agoReply

urmom

I don't usually read LGBTQ romances, as you don't usually read straight romances but I liked this one. I'm very picky when it comes to reading material, and dystopian is not a genre I like but I enjoyed reading your story. I like the fact that Henry is okay and proud of being an asshole and he sounds kind of hot ;).
I will definitely keep reading and bookmark your story. I'm excited to see where their relationship will go! There were just a few little errors that can be easily fixed but other than that, good job! I liked it a lot!

4 years agoReply

Jesse Wolfes

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it! And yes, Henry is a bisexual hottie ;D, he likes being an asshole too. He finds it thrilling to make people mad. Kind of like your character, Matt. Oooh, thats cool, we both have similar characters, except Henry isn't rough, at least not yet ;)

4 years agoReply

urmom

@Jesse Wolfes, Yeah, Matt is eye candy as well. Which chapter are you on? It's a shame Henry is probably going to be taken by Reed. He sounds lke he would make an interesting boyfriend.

4 years agoReply

Jesse Wolfes

@hanshy, he would be. And I'm on chapter 18. So no, not that kind of rough haha

4 years agoReply

urmom

@Jesse Wolfes, ha ha, it gets a little rough ;).......

4 years agoReply

Jesse Wolfes

@hanshy, ah im getting there omlll, I love the book!

4 years agoReply

urmom

@Jesse Wolfes, ahhh thank youuuu. Make sure to bookmark it but thx for the support.