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This is actually quite intriguing that I think I can only be disappointed by whatever follows. It makes me curious and i love the writing style, it seems out of this world. Reminds me of Lobsang Rompa.

One thing- that line in which tears fell and he was facing skyward needs rewording. Its too complicated.

4 years agoReply

steiner001

Thanks....I will do it....actually right now I am busy writing the next issues......I have planned to update two issues that is why it is taking time...

4 years agoReply

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