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hildagotham

I’m Fleming!, a professional Comic, Character, Webtoon, and Cover artist, and I just finished reading your story. I genuinely loved it. The way you build tension, craft atmosphere, and develop such authentic characters is incredibly impressive.
Your writing naturally lends itself to visual storytelling, and I truly believe it has amazing potential as a graphic novel or comic. I’d be honored to collaborate and help bring your world to life through expressive, cinematic art that captures the emotion and energy of your work.
I also want to mention that I’m flexible with budget, and we can discuss terms that work for both of us as we explore the project Discord: patricia_castillo55

1 week agoReply

Luvina

What an enticing first impression. Wonderful! This is so imaginative and I love it :)

8 years agoReply

Alef Magnus

Beautiful as always. This could be the next big hit in Penana. ;)

8 years agoReply

Frances

Aww thank you, Alef 😁 long time, no talk! I hope all is well!

8 years agoReply

Aretice N. Treader

I love your description. It's not excessive, but it flows well. I think your characters are all really interesting. I like that Lirare didn't immediately lash out at Roark because of the history between them, and they have a really interesting dynamic together.

The only thing I would suggest that you pay extra special attention to is how you punctuate your dialogue. It's not outrageously wrong, but it could use a bit of work. Other than that, consider me a fan of this story. :)

9 years agoReply

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