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黑正
跑回來證實了，原來這裡就在鋪排「她」的登場🤭
1 year agoReply
緬因吉
對呀，這兒就舖了
1 year agoReply
黑正
@緬因吉, 問題是看不出鋪排的，就會認為在水劇情🥹
1 year agoReply
緬因吉
@黑正,對呀，未來可能會調整一下節奏吧><，謝謝黑正大大的指導
1 year agoReply
黑正
@緬因吉, 也不是節奏吧……🤔

就是有時不能太隱晦，要稍微明顯一點，看得出是在鋪排重要人物。這是來自我本人的慘痛教訓😂
1 year agoReply
緬因吉
@黑正,好，我懂了，希望未來會有二稿@@
1 year agoReply
黑正
@緬因吉, 加油🥳🥳🥳
1 year agoReply
突破口上的貓
不會是撞到薩諾斯吧XD
1 year agoReply
緬因吉
來找無限寶石了！
1 year agoReply
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