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AnFr安鍅
評語：一篇充滿奇幻色彩的冒險故事，通過生動的場景描寫與細膩的意象，成功營造出神秘而緊張的海底世界氛圍。故事在創意與描寫上表現出色，旋龜與歸墟殿的設定增添了史詩感，但受限於篇幅，角色情感刻畫與情節反轉略顯不足，開放式結局也讓故事稍顯未完待續。
3 weeks agoReply
妘珚
很開心你喜歡故事氛圍設定
會努力角色刻劃方式，期待下一次的創挑~😍
2 weeks agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@妘珚,我也期待下一次的遇見~
2 weeks agoReply
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