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Esfandiar C. Hale

Woaaaah! This is so cool! Like how Jay mentioned, I love how their personality showed in this. It was certainly interesting to read!

2 years agoReply

RampantStrawberry

Tysm! I always see in movies how the pilots have no job but to get out there and be mericlessly killed on the spot, while the ‘walkers’ always get some dramatic scene. I wanted to give the birds a moment too ;p

2 years agoReply

The research truly shows! You did an amazing job! I appreciate that you utilized context to help explain what certain code words meant (referring to FOX 2 and FOX3). Even though I did need to look them up to realize that the numbers referred to what kind of missiles were being fired, I was still able to determine that it meant they were firing something. I loved that, despite the lack of a traditional descriptive summary, you were able to provide personalities to the characters involved. Excellent work, Berry. :)

I have been overly thrilled with the submissions so far. Both you and Hale followed the prompt perfectly and provided exactly what I was looking for. I see that deciding on a winner for this contest is going to be a challenge. :)

2 years agoReply

RampantStrawberry

thanks, this is my first time, so it took a quite a bit of research haha

this was such a fun contest! very original! props to that!

Keep your eyes to the sky!

2 years agoReply

@RampantStrawberry, ...and don't look down!

Well, for this being your first time, you did fantastic. Like I said, your research really showed. :)

2 years agoReply

RampantStrawberry

@Jay Ellis, Thank you so much!

2 years agoReply

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