I just read your work and was immediately drawn to its visual potential your characters and world would translate beautifully to comics. I'm Aleena, a professional comic artist specializing in adapting written stories into compelling visual narratives.I'd love to explore bringing your story to life through my artwork. When you have a moment, we could discuss the possibilities and I can share some samples of my previous adaptations.
You can reach me here on Discord at (aleenajames89) Looking forward to the chance to collaborate.

I'm not good with editing and telling people what I think. Every time I read a story, it always seems fine to me. Yet, people always find problems with my stuff. That was all through my high school life, that happened.



I guess the only thing I'll tell you is, I found a few places where I'd place a few commas or others in it, but I have a tool for that. - If you need some support for editing grammar, there is a site called LanguageTool. I use it, and it highlights blue or yellow words or phrases on what it thinks for grammar.