This was an excellent story! I really enjoyed your approach. To be honest, this is very similar to the direction I would have taken were I to be writing an entry for this contest. Fantastic job!

The only critiques I would mention would be that there were some missing words in a few of the sentences and there were a handful of other sentences that I had a little difficulty understanding. This, sadly, caused me to have trouble following the last part of the story. Nothing too major, however. Could be fixed easily with just a little more proofreading.

Overall, though, great job. I loved the imagery and the tale of the rock's first story. It was a fascinating tale and really stuck to the prompt. A very solid entry. :)

I didn’t think too much when writing this, it was more of a spontaneous venture lead by the next word written down. I had a lot of fun with this :)) Hope you enjoy my lil’quick story~!