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阿掌
小小討論一下，欲言不言，這個「不」字主動的意味比較重，看起來就像她想講但故意不講，用欲言「未」言，是不是比較有這個場面該有的那種將說但又未能說的感覺呢？
1 year agoReply
供過佛的多多綠
好像是耶（沉思
那欲言又止呢？好像又跟欲言未言差了一點？
嘶，我ｃｐｕ快燒乾了（好容易
1 year agoReply
阿掌
@供過佛的多多綠,「未」會有一種，我想說，但進度條到90%的時候我放棄了，說不出來，「又」的話可能積了10%就決定還是不說了這樣～

止的話的確差了一些些的感覺～

個人感覺啦XD
1 year agoReply
供過佛的多多綠
@阿掌,那我閉門思考一下(X
我打算寫完全部回頭修w(快寫完了
1 year agoReply
阿掌
@供過佛的多多綠,加油～
1 year agoReply
海貍
寫得很讚！！繼續加油～
2 years agoReply
供過佛的多多綠
嘿嘿嘿，謝謝海狸誇誇ww
2 years agoReply
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