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深淵
日後不知道會不會再次出現，例如讓師傅的形象更加立體，平常是個菸鬼(用行動和話語之類的)但又不乏體貼和處世的方式。那個後會有期讓我腦內出現一點畫面了。
2 days agoReply
楠都月
師傅會不會出現這件事就涉及劇透了（ 
我想過想寫更多師傅的細節 
但就會太多回憶殺了....... 嗚嗚嗚

2 days agoReply
五十五號試驗品
故事這樣跳躍式描述，可以很快展開伏筆，勾起讀者的好奇心。
但又破壞原本主線的戰鬥，情緒上不容易累積。
5 days agoReply
楠都月
之前也有人說過這一點（
但劇情上還是決定這樣處理好了（
5 days agoReply
猴子李
天啊  雖然還是一片迷霧 但是眼前讓讀者看到的是滿滿的情感啊......

還有 白師傅很帥啊
1 week agoReply
楠都月
初初的章節會比較多伏筆（
白師傅真的很帥🥹
1 week agoReply
阿準
這章前半段劇情很感人。QQ
1 week agoReply
楠都月
🥹🥹🥹🥹
1 week agoReply
比冥
願時間平等待你，這句話確實很諷刺，我們好像完全掌控時間，可時間卻又不由我們掌控
1 week agoReply
楠都月
是的🥹🥹🥹 某程度上這句話的背後諷刺含意也是本作其中想帶出的重要意義.....
1 week agoReply
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