Hi! As always, LOVE your book so much! I suggested a few edits, but I like how you are comparing her perspective of America with  Indonesia. Seems like she really loves her country and America too! I still think Gee Kay is pretty awesome, and Cynthia seems like a really good person. Brenda is a one of a kind sister. Maybe give Cynthia's sister a name to make it more personable? Maybe even relate her relationship to her sister to Brenda's relationship with her brother; maybe that is why she is so empathetic towards Brenda, because she has a sibling too. Just a suggestion, great story!