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櫻雪（瑛蕎） sponsored 100 for Issue 3!

我又打

4 years agoReply

羽心

❤(ӦｖӦ｡)❤(ӦｖӦ｡)❤(ӦｖӦ｡)❤(ӦｖӦ｡)

4 years agoReply

EunDog sponsored 1000 for Issue 3!

我再打

4 years agoReply

羽心

感謝eundog，好感動啊啊啊啊啊啊(´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)

4 years agoReply

sponsored 800 for Issue 3!

打死你

4 years agoReply

羽心

重要嘅事講3次！多謝！多謝！多謝！(≧∇≦)

4 years agoReply

黑羊

把刀一定係神兵，由膊頭到心臟啲骨一大堆，切骨如豆腐，唔係神兵就係刀聖。(重點錯系列)

4 years agoReply

羽心

把刀又唔會插到咁深，如果插太深就會比骨卡住拖唔到。（而且把刀唔會垂直拖）

我想像嘅畫面係把刀直插右肩，然後微微拔出再打斜滑到左胸心臟位置，再大力插入心臟。

即係插得最深嘅係右肩同心臟，右肩與心臟之間嘅距離就係傷口較深嘅劃傷。

4 years agoReply

黑羊

@羽心, 算啦，我錯，唔好太認真

4 years agoReply

羽心

@黑羊,我驚你唔明姐，我睇返都覺得自己寫得唔夠詳細 (*>_<*)ﾉ

4 years agoReply

黑羊

@羽心,事實上係我吹毛求疵啫

4 years agoReply

揮戈反反

大小的小寫錯了！

4 years agoReply

羽心

已改，thx (•ө•)♡

4 years agoReply

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