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梳芙李

有啲似莫斯科袐密地鐵個本書

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

我未睇過啊，不過相信睇落去會俾到唔同發展你😉🙌🏻

3 years agoReply

Sidksij

@黑犬風易, https://m.penana.com/story/58936/%E7%B5%82%E9%83%A8%E6%9B%B2-%E8%8E%AB%E6%96%AF%E7%A7%91%E7%A7%98%E5%AF%86%E5%9C%B0%E9%90%B5-%E5%AF%A6%E9%AB%94%E6%9B%B8%E5%B7%B2%E4%B8%8A%E6%9E%B6?l=zh佢係講緊呢個

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

@默颺粉, 有機會望下先✌🏻

3 years agoReply

梳芙李

@黑犬風易,絕對相信你嘅文筆！

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

@李小魚, 多謝你嘅支持❤️

3 years agoReply

輟學者

主持人未講，西裝男就知係五分鐘內要跑哂。係伏筆定錯誤？

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

你好細心啊!!!應該係我寫少咗句, 已經補翻, 唔該哂你！

3 years agoReply

輟學者

@黑犬風易,all good😁

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

@輟學者, 講多句, 咁多人睇過, 得你發現有問題, 好勁 :)

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

@輟學者, 多謝你提我改翻~

3 years agoReply

輟學者

@黑犬風易,歡迎出書前搵我幫你double check😎🤣
你個故事寫得好，吸引我細心品嚐姐😌

3 years agoReply

黑犬風易

@輟學者, Hahaha正啊，有人做校對好重要☺️

3 years agoReply

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