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Lethe
這個孤兒院該不會是是把小孩的時間賣給達官顯貴的吧(猜測中
2 weeks agoReply
楠都月
你看下去就知道😎
2 weeks agoReply
林墨
我喜歡這章。情感爆發。

果然之前的章節太和平就會出事。
7 months agoReply
楠都月
就是在鋪墊之後的悲劇了呢🥹
7 months agoReply
霽客
這段故事張力夠強，人物生動，懸念和恐怖感層層推進，但上半段日常略長，可用短句穿插伏筆，公園異變段落可用斷句加強心跳感。
8 months agoReply
楠都月
因為想突顯普通的日常是多麼可貴.....之後銀月要面臨一個重要的「選擇」。
不過都可以考慮簡化一點／
8 months agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
不行了，折腰書讀得少，已經跟不上楠大的套路了，藍橋哥又是誰啦！！！
8 months agoReply
楠都月
提示是髮色～
8 months agoReply
原子能
時鐘野獸圖案！這不就是時獸契約的標誌嗎？為什麼會出現在女主的童年回憶裡？還有那個閉眼圖案，感覺都是重要線索。這段回憶絕對不是單純的幻覺
8 months agoReply
楠都月
到底是回憶還是幻覺還是什麼呢......
8 months agoReply
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