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W.H.
這首詩，從詩題到內容，都不落俗套，由「畫像」到「現世」到「心靈」，透過詩句和詩的歧義性，交織出虛與實。

每看一次，每每都有不同的感受，這也是好詩的特色之一。

我很喜歡這首詩！！
4 months agoReply
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謝謝喜歡~

我也很喜歡《筆心》那首詩，眼前為之一亮，所以想試著跳脫一種固定形式，針對題目做出更多方面的塑造
4 months agoReply
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