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一路追看覺得幾有趣
不過這場感覺有點拖，用了差不多十章去寫🙈
你不說我也沒有發現...是有點拖了，中間護衛軍統領的那一段有點多餘，過程當中內心戲很多。不過這一段也快收尾了，就不是知道下一個段落的劇情，會不會讓你們感覺...推進的幅度不夠大...