I feel like this will get first or second place.

This story reminds me a lot of "american psycho" the book and the film
BTW i enjoyed reading this ( dont take that the wrong way)

I guess this could be described as horror, just not in the sense that many people might imagine. Regardless, it was a great and gruesome story. I liked that in the end Nilo was just being prepped to be eaten. The only thing I would say, is that I found a lot of typos, so it may be worth proofreading it again to revise those. Other than that, good story. I enjoyed it. :)