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bunnybear

IT'S SO TENSE. I'm excited to find out the next bit...

Where he says "You we're trained by the best." Should it be 'were' instead?

I love this!!

2 years agoReply

savannah

It's supposed to be! I wasn't sure if I was doing it right, lol.

Yeah, it should. I think I saw that at some point and was going to change it but then I never did-

2 years agoReply

bunnybear

@Imlay,It's definitely tense, makes you want to find out what happens!! It's well-written, especially how the last line leaves it on a cliff hanger!

2 years agoReply

savannah

@bunnybear, This makes me happy! I'm glad that I did this right.

2 years agoReply

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