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This is really good! I’m finding myself very attached to the characters and feeling cery immeresed. You clearly have a great talent for writing!

Just one thing though, is that i would suggest using speech marks when characters are talking. This would make it easier to tell if someone was talking or not.

Great story! Can’t wait to read more :D

1 year agoReply

M.G Brown

Omg, thank you so much❤️❤️ You literally just made my day❤️❤️ Aso, thats strange because i put lines as dialogue… Why didnt the apo register them? Ill just go back and add them ig…

1 year agoReply

M.G Brown

Thank you again for warning me about the dialogues!! I had no idea! I went back and added lines! Thank you sm❤️❤️❤️

1 year agoReply

@Mad S-N,no problem!

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