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Esfandiar C. Hale
Hmm, kinda feel Duncan. That feeling of helplessness and urge to help but u cant.... kinda relatable. Holly seems really nice :) 

And Charlie, pls come and be my country's president. 
2 years agoReply
Duncan has really strong moral beliefs, and I like that! Nice chapter! Only thing I would suggest is that some words can be replaced with others, like 'bended' which can be replaced with 'bent.' But overall, amazing job, Strawberry!

- Cheeto ❤
3 years agoReply
RampantStrawberry
bended--nooooo lmao 

this is why some people need an extra set of eyes, haha ! 

Thanks for the suggestion, Cheeto! 
3 years agoReply
@RampantStrawberry, you’re welcome!
3 years agoReply
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