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bunnybear

Noel- leader vibes

also the repetition of 'no answer' is effective, i like it

2 years agoReply

Addison04

So on the blog it says noel has no siblings so how can she call her sister if she doesnt have one

2 years agoReply

Mia Flame

The siblings on the blog was more if they had siblings in the youth group. Though seriously, girl, you are finding all the holes in this story. Keep going!

2 years agoReply

Ntando92Sibiya

Very captivating! I must say though you sped into the sudden change a little too quickly, but other than that, great work. The read is very engaging and enjoyable.

2 years agoReply

Mia Flame

A sudden change??? Any ideas on how to make it better??

and thank you!

2 years agoReply

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