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浪者
整天和自己的侍女卿卿我我, 跑去遊山玩水不務正業, 祖先的在天之靈肯定沒眼看.

公國軍大概可以開一個去死團給這類士兵了.
1 year agoReply
VIA
雖然我沒寫出來但應該有www
1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
天啊，我好想看到唱歌這段在動畫中演出喔！

我很喜歡男主跟侍女的互動。
1 year agoReply
VIA
預歌的部分因為要全靠形容來寫，這個其實算是我寫作上挺弱的地方w(文渣)

整本書寫起來我的印象是……寫榭瑟洛和愛莉須的互動最輕鬆(
1 year agoReply
嚮往國度
到底什麼實驗xd
1 year agoReply
VIA
看下去就知道了w
1 year agoReply
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