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jamber86

Around the 61% mark you repeat a line... the close to the border one. I like this story. The paising is really good. Also the plot logic makes sense while still maintaining mystery. A lot of stories on these sites have illogical plot points or you can read the plot early on. My only problem is you do not update nearly enough, but I guess I can forgive that.

8 years agoReply

nicolzie

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll go back and fix that line ;)
I am so happy to hear that you like my story! I will do my best to update it more often, especially since I'm entering summer vacation! Once again, thank you!

8 years agoReply

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