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星野維
字數方面後期已有改善，至於會想仔細描述內容主要是怕場景太抽象模糊，讀者可能無法想像，大概是我不夠自信吧！
我會針對大大給的幾點進行修改的，再次表達我的感謝
4 weeks agoReply
子不語
對你的讀者多點信心。
4 weeks agoReply
星野維
感謝您的建議，讓我找到了問題點，我會持續精進我的創作！
4 weeks agoReply
可鹹甜
個人淺見，建議還是多方詢問，多多益善~
4 weeks agoReply
星野維
@可鹹甜,好的，還是很感謝願意在百忙中觀看我的作品。
4 weeks agoReply
可鹹甜
@星野維叔叔的讀後心得，請參考~
4 weeks agoReply
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