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EDA ANDREWS
I love the way the story was presented, thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
1 year agoReply
EDA ANDREWS
@Folasade Bolarinwa, Your welcome, continue your story you have my support!
1 year agoReply
Folasade Bolarinwa
Thank you. I didn't think it would be that good since I wrote the story on a whim after reading some comedy books about the military.
1 year agoReply
That was pretty bad
1 year agoReply
@EDA ANDREWS, My stories aren't full of grammatical errors. My characters are complex and have goals and desires. Does this have that? No. And Ill give you something. Your story is bad. But better than this that's for sure.
1 year agoReply
EDA ANDREWS
@Bengolong, C'mon, it's not like your stories are any better!
1 year agoReply
@EDA ANDREWS, I would ask what they didn't like. This for example. Complete broken English. Unlikable characters. Weird looking characters. Hateable main character I mean she's just the worst. And its obvious the person who wrote this has only seen cheap anime by the way they think people act. Also the writer seems to have a weird fetish for ass slapping and asses in general.
1 year agoReply
EDA ANDREWS
That was very rude, if you had spent hours writing something you though a master piece then someone can and decided to degrade you for no reason how would you feel?
1 year agoReply
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