Three musics...? Wow. Just Wow. You have written a really wonderful piece and I could almost picture the scenes on my own translated in Korean! Don't worry maybe it does seem quite awkward combining Korean words in English sentences as a Korean but it makes enough sense to me:) Thank you for your participation and your marvelous story!
P. S. BTW I'm sorry for your grandmother...I wish her to R.I.P.
P. S. BTW I'm sorry for your grandmother...I wish her to R.I.P.