Around the 61% mark you repeat a line... the close to the border one. I like this story. The paising is really good. Also the plot logic makes sense while still maintaining mystery. A lot of stories on these sites have illogical plot points or you can read the plot early on. My only problem is you do not update nearly enough, but I guess I can forgive that.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll go back and fix that line ;) I am so happy to hear that you like my story! I will do my best to update it more often, especially since I'm entering summer vacation! Once again, thank you!
I am so happy to hear that you like my story! I will do my best to update it more often, especially since I'm entering summer vacation! Once again, thank you!