Just went through this, okay your writing is quite complex, I battled to understand certain things. I had to sit through and digest everything carefully. Also came by a lot of words didn't know. But thanks for the vocab boost, hahahahaha. You are very well educated, it's clear.
Try to find balance though. Have complex writing that caters for your audience. I will go through other chapters later on and comment on them.
Try to find balance though. Have complex writing that caters for your audience. I will go through other chapters later on and comment on them.