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Hunk Strongthighs

great story! I did notice that you keep switching from the present tense to the past tense, so you might want to take a look at that.
May the best man/woman/monster win!

8 years ago

Alef Magnus

Thank you! A common problem I have, still learning to stay consistent.

8 years ago

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