Haha, I don't really know what you mean. What's a jab? The house was described well, if you want to hear someone describe a house to you. But I like to read stories about people, not houses.
@T. S. Stone, Jab, to pointedly tease or mock someone. I wrote I like to have clear visual of what’s going on arround the characters. I wrote Fire Feathers Prolouge.
@EridanusStar, oh I didn't know that. I've never met you, man, so no, I wasn't trying to tease you or anything. I'm just saying in general, other people usual like to hear about things happening rather than long descriptions.