Hello! I've finished writing the first draft of my second book (Deceptive Collision), but now I'm in the process of editing and revising. I could use some feedback because I've read it so many times that it feels like I'm not actually reading it anymore. I've only put the intro up for now, though. Please tell me if you can see the intro as well, I had it as unlisted before.

https://www.penana.com/story/139262/deceptive-collision