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萌鼠是廢文症候群重度患者！
ISSUE #14
Author: 萌鼠
Published:
May 29, 2022
萌鼠是廢文症候群重度患者！
Author: 萌鼠
Published:
May 29, 2022
ISSUE #14
今生酒原意
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因為怕放在詩中打擾各位的雅興，所以覺得可以放在這。

鼠的真理：吾拚一生如佳釀，簡單其實就是希望自己的一生如同陳年美酒一般。

我把美夢的那部分意指為何你要在那邊喝酒做白日夢，眼前的人生自己想想不就是最好的美夢？

苦甜參半就是人生多少有些得失。

而甚好佳釀就是這才是人生的意思。

花滿天下，何看今朝？這句，意指天下之大，分分合合，為何要沉溺在悲痛的感覺，而不去尋找自己的希望之花呢？

評論：這篇個人也覺得押韻做的不太好，畢竟我不常寫詩，偶爾寫寫，所以押韻真的難！

（歡迎自我學習，欸！不對我是說留下你寶貴的想法)

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Last updated: Nov 5, 2022
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