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會痛的鋼琴
Intro
Author: 夏柔
會痛的鋼琴
Author: 夏柔
Intro
No Plagiarism!XNyDBbHtuZbl3vZ9mzM7posted on PＥNAＮＡ

【寫作練習：會痛的鋼琴】

高詩佳老師的書《閱讀寫作小學堂》的練習

主題與矛盾有關，原本題目應為飛天猴，我擅自改成其他題目

這篇文章算是自己的懺悔文，但也是一篇短文，也寫到哭......

如果有人看過《葬樂園》其中一個事件就在裡頭，只是沒有寫在小說裡

971Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡozYQbaJqCe
學習單：利用四個段落寫下一篇短文

971Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQxlZcOqdPq
思考：

開始：鋼琴覺得哪裡痛？走音了覺得痛嗎？主人敲琴鍵敲得太大力覺得痛嗎？沒有做保養，零件出問題，所以痛嗎？

發展：鋼琴沒有知覺，為什麼它會覺得痛？鋼琴是發生了甚麼事嗎？

高潮：痛了，它會有甚麼表現？

結果：鋼琴最後的下場是甚麼？

216.73.216.82

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會痛的鋼琴
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Short Story
Last updated: Mar 23, 2023
Total word count: 1,411
Total reading time: 5 Minutes
Writer:
夏柔
短文 閱讀 鋼琴 懺悔文
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