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Feedback and ideas please.
SAMANDCOLBY19961997
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Hi, I finished the storyline for my new story, the story title it's under is called Love, Heaven but the actual story title will be called A Blaine New Years, sorry if that's confusing, I would appreciate it if you read the storyline and give me feedback on it and what I should change. Thanks in advance! ( I'm trying to get someone to answer me or read it.)

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