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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #77
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #77
〈四年〉　作者：月穎靈
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：愛情校園、青梅竹馬類型。國三生青梅竹馬因為課業而分開，然而卻在大學的宿舍中互相遇見。

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　　目前看到第４章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：７０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：７０％

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　　優點：人物描寫佳，流暢度高。

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　　吸引度：劇情沒有很特別，因此沒有吸引到。

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Last updated: Aug 4, 2025
Total word count: 13,864
Total reading time: 46 Minutes
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