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《詩詞散文雜記》
Author:
木雚
《詩詞散文雜記》
Author:
木雚
ISSUE #5
《憶江南・雨日悟禪》--宋詞一闕
No Plagiarism!sYGK3Xw5uIwGJeIYh8LGposted on PENANA 日本最近是梅雨季,如果不開除濕機,室內都很陰濕難受。趁著這個機會寫了一個小品,順便練習填詞。253Please respect copyright.PENANA57e5GWaq3K
不得不說,歷經絕句的平仄洗禮之後,宋詞的平仄式樣比較自由一些,寫起來也比較不綁手綁腳,挺有趣的。8964 copyright protection249PENANAXh2C8p5bm1 維尼
《憶江南・雨日悟禪》253Please respect copyright.PENANA0A5s7bTEfs
梅雨日,陰冷意闌姍。蛙叫蟲鳴連數句,喧囂騰鬧甚娛歡,浮世更知禪。8964 copyright protection249PENANAEYqRUSAUe6 維尼
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此闕是《憶江南》正格調,平仄如下,歡迎有興趣的朋友也玩看看!8964 copyright protection249PENANARf0X9KHev6 維尼
平●仄。句253Please respect copyright.PENANAuYSWPeosZ8
●仄仄平平。韻253Please respect copyright.PENANApMQuVvnLqz
●仄●平平仄仄。句253Please respect copyright.PENANAMVGna3JpAQ
●平●仄仄平平。韻253Please respect copyright.PENANACLkZ4hwqjv
●仄仄平平。韻8964 copyright protection249PENANAh3Rr72yK4H 維尼
●表自由,平仄皆可。253Please respect copyright.PENANAPwWN17A9Xx
最後的句指非韻字,韻表押韻字。8964 copyright protection249PENANAWOvuo2oMvJ 維尼
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