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這週的主題是「夢」,感覺屬於比較好發揮的題材。構思時先想到的,是一個人不要命地喝酒,只為了能睡著,夢見多年前失去的孩子。8964 copyright protection83PENANAhiVRGAWCoo 維尼
初稿以嬰幼兒和酒精為中心,寫了「裝滿灰塵的嬰兒床不收」和「結塊變色的奶粉罐不丟」等句子。8964 copyright protection83PENANABPCc3v5Acl 維尼
寫到一半卻發現,結尾的老男人實在太頹廢,喝酒不夠還吸大麻。便把嬰幼兒改成青少年或青年,比較符合他自毀人生的痛苦程度。8964 copyright protection83PENANACoYr2KwAea 維尼
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