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短篇作品集（PG-13）
ISSUE #6
Author: 北緯64度
Published:
Jan 10, 2025
短篇作品集（PG-13）
Author: 北緯64度
Published:
Jan 10, 2025
ISSUE #6
品嚐｜#情慾 #微小說
No Plagiarism!vOs3RrZBHXpaZvTsHX5Fposted on PＥNAＮＡ

「小力點，慢慢吸，一滴都別浪費。」

「很好，接著再含口紅茶。」

「如何？喜歡我的奶茶嗎？」110Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSIIwWaYGgB
110Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ35QUb3FAUs
110Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiCCWc0Jfm8

後記：

這是為創挑寫的，字數限制30。

主題是情慾，一共寫了三篇，這篇最令我頭痛。

我想表達的東西，和呈現出來的結果，似乎有些落差，但還是努力完成了。

後來修改過一次，我更喜歡新的版本，在此附上舊文：

「小力點，慢慢吸，一滴都別浪費。」

「做得很好，喝口紅茶吧。」

「如何？特調奶茶不錯吧？」110Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMXY5H6XtHz
110Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPthsR1i5OA
不過改了一句，似乎就變得更有畫面，雖然想留住「做得很好」，但可以接受。

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短篇作品集（PG-13）
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Last updated: Mar 22, 2025
Total word count: 10,981
Total reading time: 37 Minutes
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