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春詩賞「因你而在的故事」/皮皮的記憶迴廊 Vol.03(徽章已全數派發完)
ENTRY #213
Author: W.H.
Published:
Mar 22, 2025
春詩賞「因你而在的故事」/皮皮的記憶迴廊 Vol.03(徽章已全數派發完)
Published:
Mar 22, 2025
ENTRY #213
WEEK — 06「夢」— 噩夢
Author: W.H.
Published:
Mar 22, 2025
1 Min Read
252 Words
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綿羊一群在草地

草地一片在河堤

河堤一道在水邊

所有的水都乾涸

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乾涸的岸龜裂了

龜裂的還有人心

人心被 A.I. 取代

被取代尙有淚海

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淚海主人變鱷魚

鱷魚的魚逃上岸

岸上綿羊一起玩

完蛋剩下一堆噩

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噩進大家的夢裡

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裡頭不再有創意

全是噩噩噩噩噩

多麼對稱且美麗

非常快速有效率

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噩噩噩噩噩噩噩

呃呃呃呃呃呃呃

他從打嗝中驚醒

看著 A.I. 流冷汗 

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汗流浹背真難受

受不了就去喝水

水裡有隻尼羅鱷

鱷魚對他笑不完

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【說明】

1. 玩一下「頂真」技巧。

2. 想學 A.I. 詩的邏輯大亂兜/鬥，結果發現，還挺不容易。

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附圖原畫作者是 Pierre Pinsard。根據藝術網站指稱，其著作財產權已經消滅，原畫圖檔屬公有領域 (public domain)，任何人均可使用。

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