其實這首並不算正式的詩,74Please respect copyright.PENANAOmYkRGjgZw
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,74Please respect copyright.PENANAOhb9Zvjf4i
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)74Please respect copyright.PENANArHNYnWYjS6
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~74Please respect copyright.PENANAyn7Lumegpp
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,74Please respect copyright.PENANAIN4usGVee0
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),74Please respect copyright.PENANAyvgBUDg4cd
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,74Please respect copyright.PENANAZ5w067fo64
我開始寫書法。74Please respect copyright.PENANAswRBLhvf5H
這個書法的第一句叫做74Please respect copyright.PENANATy86CZ6ZgF
「天地無用」74Please respect copyright.PENANAFPxhMuDT4d
結果用這個字偏小,74Please respect copyright.PENANArZ8ldPpXq6
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,74Please respect copyright.PENANALbEbteYkNj
所以才會越寫越沒自信~74Please respect copyright.PENANAm39khMIwhz
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,74Please respect copyright.PENANAfr4NTT4XHd
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用74Please respect copyright.PENANA4QD8PhRV2t
山河不移74Please respect copyright.PENANAqe57fB2mBx
人間有情74Please respect copyright.PENANA0PIOH2FOAe
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,74Please respect copyright.PENANAZPg5HlWItV
似乎練了1~2個小時,74Please respect copyright.PENANAZvoOWTbErV
不過字的大小幾乎一致,74Please respect copyright.PENANAqSVYEeJ7xe
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,74Please respect copyright.PENANAkamBVnUZMP
但是心終於靜下來,74Please respect copyright.PENANA4MbuHTeU8N
只是手也爆酸~74Please respect copyright.PENANAmUNSqXg9xZ
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。74Please respect copyright.PENANAehMi2u3YKW
第一句的天地無用,74Please respect copyright.PENANAEs9SVaSytC
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。74Please respect copyright.PENANAdo7rsqEjps
第二句的山河不移,74Please respect copyright.PENANAgNc1Usuk7P
其實也可以寫作山海不移,74Please respect copyright.PENANAW0x0AXriiN
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),74Please respect copyright.PENANAB0hFVWa9VO
所以才改用河。74Please respect copyright.PENANAZhxuMRbJJB
其實跟第一句類似,就是74Please respect copyright.PENANATWP9w96nK0
山不轉,路轉。74Please respect copyright.PENANAJpkdx75XZK
路不轉,人轉。74Please respect copyright.PENANAffeuhsofA7
的意思。74Please respect copyright.PENANA20H8OL9QmM
第三句的人間有情,74Please respect copyright.PENANAmZ3I9vj7xA
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,74Please respect copyright.PENANAiOxnLxDXkg
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,74Please respect copyright.PENANAqqg34ZBYsG
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。74Please respect copyright.PENANA9iySVEVYrq
最後一句的日月無雙,74Please respect copyright.PENANABeIIGXnEwn
指的就是一枝草一滴露,74Please respect copyright.PENANAg9rdWSoKMn
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,74Please respect copyright.PENANA2YvMN0xWg9
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的74Please respect copyright.PENANAqzgEzKdXSh
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!74Please respect copyright.PENANAILEoELCy9H
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),74Please respect copyright.PENANAqaxi2cZ8Xc
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~74Please respect copyright.PENANAHAVZPVVZ7f
再回來看看那首詩:74Please respect copyright.PENANAdSga4P8neh
第一句的天地無用,74Please respect copyright.PENANAj3H7bD0IfC
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,74Please respect copyright.PENANAx5nm552XWw
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,74Please respect copyright.PENANAMuIjTEArOX
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~74Please respect copyright.PENANAsWl8EsjCI0
即使平常看起來懶散,74Please respect copyright.PENANAsuUMueQmlH
對戰時卻不馬虎~74Please respect copyright.PENANALr5COHfrKv
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,74Please respect copyright.PENANAkOGJycYm3M
就能達到這樣的成就~74Please respect copyright.PENANAxXCgyBnvmt
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,74Please respect copyright.PENANAIDN5RFZBh8
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。74Please respect copyright.PENANAmcbWq5Ax0B
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,74Please respect copyright.PENANAXQmqJVeOnY
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~74Please respect copyright.PENANA1zLQ7gdLKn(除非你作弊使用神獸)74Please respect copyright.PENANArFfET76Kfp
即便龍系也有弱點,74Please respect copyright.PENANAMQtjzjtKKt
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、74Please respect copyright.PENANAb4y6v9NEHl
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,74Please respect copyright.PENANAe0KWhmm09P
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、74Please respect copyright.PENANAUGYYLbV5P8
紫竽又指責他、74Please respect copyright.PENANAIPehpvkUvs
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,74Please respect copyright.PENANAAdbvYshFxk
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~74Please respect copyright.PENANAtiqqOhDgMK
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,74Please respect copyright.PENANAPk4PdqK0wm
這句其實是這首詩的重點,74Please respect copyright.PENANACxUbBh7EQG
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~74Please respect copyright.PENANAx6IBQ1QIi1
意思是希望他不要計較特別,74Please respect copyright.PENANA03kCC4Jgvc
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,74Please respect copyright.PENANA2B9lMXOVlz
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」74Please respect copyright.PENANA3B86rwoiFj
我們常常會著重在Special上面,74Please respect copyright.PENANAa4Ti65YvdY
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...74Please respect copyright.PENANAofoEKPExKW
這些都是各種意義上的Special,74Please respect copyright.PENANA1csqGALIhZ
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,74Please respect copyright.PENANAIr3UoMs9R6
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,74Please respect copyright.PENANAvWFeJrPCOg
甚至舉步維艱...74Please respect copyright.PENANAU4R9cspaxy
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,74Please respect copyright.PENANAsePzJXyfzK
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,74Please respect copyright.PENANAyZQvTLWaIw
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,74Please respect copyright.PENANAHJPhysxCs6
甚至我認為複製人,74Please respect copyright.PENANAoptIbgBCnl
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?74Please respect copyright.PENANA56XeGofAl5
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,74Please respect copyright.PENANAbaIOMx0fb7
這是為什麼呢?74Please respect copyright.PENANAaHzLyrZt1t
還有留級三年看似無所謂,74Please respect copyright.PENANA11Qz5xmxJR
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,74Please respect copyright.PENANAvCdZ0mKICs
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~74Please respect copyright.PENANApaV2q3HtbG
除了獻給學長這首詩,74Please respect copyright.PENANAW7BeigpFIy
也希望自己能做到~74Please respect copyright.PENANAAaQP1tBR1U
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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