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創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！
ENTRY #113
Author: 子不語
Published:
May 2, 2025
創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！
Published:
May 2, 2025
ENTRY #113
回覆#111凌曉潔想要子不語對【藏在泥土中的寶物】的心得
Author: 子不語
Published:
May 2, 2025
1 Min Read
143 Words
No Plagiarism!SkVPD88Ic3AfCRVCBVQTposted on PＥNAＮＡ

以我身為讀者的角度來看，這個故事的運鏡非常流暢啊，完全沒有斷點，每個場景都能在我腦海產生畫面，每個人物的動作表情都非常清晰，跟看恐怖電影沒啥兩樣。

尤其是最後的「手術開始」，會讓我想到Law Abiding Citizen（真是一部超讚的電影啊！）

而從昏迷到進手術室，我頂多就是插入一個主角做惡夢的場當作過場。否則我也會直接這樣跳過去，跟你的做法一樣！

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