看完妳的小說了，就一個言情小說而言，還蠻有趣的！
從妳的文字裡來看，景物描述有著少女漫畫的清爽線條跟發亮的光影，讀起來沒有負擔，我覺得很棒！
特別要講的是在人物互動上，尤其是女主跟女配的對話，妳有著一個很有趣的靈魂！
角色們會因為各種奇妙的因緣際會陷入很尷尬的情境中，而每個角色的對白就變得有趣又俏皮，我很喜歡這樣的人物心境。
請繼續寫下去，我覺得這本小說的女主有著妳的靈魂附在裡面！
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創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！
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May 3, 2025
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