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交響J評文/心得專欄
ISSUE #33
Author: 交響J
交響J評文/心得專欄
Author: 交響J
ISSUE #33
【死者恆生】評文
No Plagiarism!5B6oDymvjNCZaa9A6rRoposted on PＥNAＮＡ

作品連結：https://www.penana.com/story/175921/%E6%AD%BB%E8%80%85%E6%81%86%E7%94%9F/issue/0

死者恆生是一個很有趣的設定，看完每一章便想要知道更多，然後就不知不覺得繼續看下去了，會想知道主角們在這片大陸會做出甚麼樣的選擇去生活，或著他們是否能找回記憶離開這片大陸。

我覺得劇情的安排不錯，過了前三章定生死的關卡，是會想繼續看下去的。

能讓我想看下去，劇情就成功一半了。

另外的小缺點就是文字的精緻度欠佳，如果能在更上一層樓，小說會更好看。94Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgM4vHcmm5S

還有表示無語的時候。可以說：他的一席話令璐娜無言以對。或是輕小說一點：璐娜：「......」

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Last updated: Jul 7, 2025
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