Chapter 1.03: September 20, 2015
"I've finished reading your manuscript."
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"
"I'll be fine."
"If you say so."
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"
"By all means."
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."
"I'll do my best."
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."
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