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萌狼日誌
ISSUE #14
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
Published:
Dec 25, 2020
萌狼日誌
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
Published:
Dec 25, 2020
ISSUE #14
《全員惡玉》結局意外地不錯
No Plagiarism!2hVIKAJyMzY0WRJDxjx1posted on PＥNAＮＡ

《全員惡玉》結局意外地不錯，欺詐師和搬運工都用盡最後的力氣乃至奉上生命去完成最後的目的，打鬥的節奏或人民反抗處刑課的的橋段也很棒。

白雪皚皚的背景、欺詐師身後十字架狀的柱子均讓人想起現在是聖誕，欺詐師綻放的血花喚醒了人民的意志，為城市留下轉變的種子。搬運工擊倒最後的戰機後，闇夜迎來了晨曦，為這座城市帶來希望之光。

最後的留白也恰到好處，有點讓我想起《菸草》的結局，藉這個機會談談怎麼樣的留白叫做好的留白呢？

一個故事有分為主線與副線（參考Robert McKee寫的《故事的解剖》），主線就是主角有一個要完成的目標並遇到阻礙，主角解決阻礙達成目標的過程。如果在結尾主線收束完畢（欺詐師和搬運工終於完成了自己的使命護送兩兄妹），副線（最後的地點到底是什麼？）是可以留白的。

正如上一篇文所說，前面有一些槽點，但整體來說我覺得《全員惡玉》值得看。

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